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Thursday, August 04, 2005

Sesaja, just so

Basically speaking, i don't really read sajak stuff.
For me, you got to have the right 'jiwa' to really appreciate the sajak.
I'd prefer pantun, cerpen, sketsa etc.
Tapi kadang2 akan ada sajak yang meruntun jiwa kan?

Below is one of those sajak.
I got it from Yam's blog.
Somebody sent her that sajak by sms,
and it seems that yam was quite, no, very delighted with
that somebody's effort.

Kekasih

Akan kupintal buih-buih

menjadi tali mengikatmu

akan kuanyam gelombang-gelombang
menjadi hamparan ranjang tidurmu

akan kutenun awan gemawan

menjadi selendang menudungi rambutmu

akan kujahit bayu gunung

menjadi baju pakaian malammu

akan kupetik bintang timur

menjadi kerongsang menyinari dadamu

akan kujolok bulan tembaga

menjadi lampu menyuluhi rindu

akan kurebahkan mentari

menjadi laut malammu menghirup sakar madumu

kekasih

hitunglah mimpi yang membunuh realiti dengan syurga ilusi


Sasterawan Negara Allahyarham Usman Awang

I wonder la kan...
if i were to sent this,
would it have the same effect?

hehehehe

10 Comments:

Blogger azynazura said...

salam,

i accidentally found ur link frm my fren's blog so..
i accidentally membukanya..:D

nice blog i'll sure revisit again..

11:40 am  
Blogger hana_kirana said...

Hmm... ok here Dr. Love dah bersuara,

Adalah lebih baik sekiranya anda melihat minat gadis tersebut, sama ada puisi ataupun seperti anda. Tetapi ada baiknya jika anda mencuba dengan memberinya puisi ini. Yelah, who knows kan?

Good Luck. :)

9:25 pm  
Blogger zakzak said...

azynazura:
ish takde hal punya
sila2 lah datang balik
but i really doubt this blog is that interesting.
thanks for coming though :)

hana and langsat:
err...kalau you gals tengok balik i punya blog, i wrote:
if i were to send...

sapa cakap saya dah kirim?
kalau saya kirim
again, stress on that KALAU.

ish...terasa jiwang gila kalu kirim puisi tuh muwahahaha

8:46 am  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

muahahaha...boleh tahan jugak jiwang zakzak ni..tp kan..once u falling in luv wif somebody u'll become jiwang naturally..n mula lah hantar lagu lah..puisi lah..(mula2 jek..pastu mungkin makin slow lah..)

so zakzak..wat am trying to say is do not hesitate to give a try to whom u like..

jeng jeng..langsat, korek2 saper zakzak suka ni... hihi

1:06 pm  
Blogger hana_kirana said...

Eh, Lin... Kita ada cakap ke dia DAH hantar/bagi puisi ni?

Zakzak, err... cuba baca balik komen kitorang tu.....

hehe

1:07 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

announcement...announcement...ZZ dah hantar sajak tu, *I* terima yesterday he he he

ZZ, sure ada org makan hati baca nih...

10:00 am  
Blogger mizzwanda said...

fuh cayalah incik zakzak haha..puitis habis..sure hancuq lebuq org yg dapat..ngehngeh

all d best mr zakzak..tu dia eh langsat duk pekena abeh!kenakan lagi cik lang ahaks

9:18 pm  
Blogger zakzak said...

dahlia:
waaa....some word of wisdom from those who experienced mushy washy stuff...hehe
i guess it's only natural kan? :)

hana:
erk!!!
:|
i guess i missread somewhere ler
hehehe :P

atn:
whooaaaa.....
how could you kak tenah?
how could you tell the others?
hahaha
nak kirim kat akak camne?
no hp pun tak tau?

mizzwanda:
hehehe setakat ni still okay lagik i.e
dia still intact lagi nampaknya
kena usaha lagi kot?
:P

4:48 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

zakzak,

:D...cayalah...1st movement da buat..kalo kurang menjadi cuba yg lebih extravaganza sket..kalo dia x tolak mentah2...maknanya awk ada chance...gd luck.. hihi

8:12 am  
Blogger zakzak said...

dahlia:
well....tak cuba tak tau kan?
kena cuba lagi gamaknya hehehe

9:01 am  

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